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Re: This is Not and Apology (but it is a poem...thats the title)
Mmm...hmmm...not your best, but...with a few word changes, could be cured of the numbness. I think thats what happened, you were so angry at your mother that your words were ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Please Help Me...
Ok, this poem...this is for Alicia Wolfe...one of my best friends...who committed suicide. She died on 11-11-04, a thursday, but she had been brain dead for exactly one week...this poem...writing ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Mannequin
*blink blink blink* Is it my turn to now gape in awe and bow at your feet? this was...is...wow. It deserves a word all its own, but I'm in a ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Guitar at Midnight
I know I've commented on this the first time I saw it, but I have to again...*shudder* I want a guitar player now...just...want...purr....goo...melt...I love the way your words flow, the ...
Dec 13, 2004 -
Re: Cutting Edge
All right, all right, for my first critique...you shall be my victim! Actually, I like it, which is odd. I usually start off with I ejoyed this but this could ...
Dec 13, 2004 -
Re: My Best for my first
All right, for the first poem I am posting up here, it shall be my best. I have written some awesome poetry, but none shall surpass this...if it does, then ...
Dec 13, 2004 -
Re: Greetings and salutations
Hello, I am here. Why? Because my old writing site was over run by immature newbs who completely murdered it and left me in a crying mass of skinned muscle ...
Dec 13, 2004
